feat(journal): pin the report-tone contract — a narrative engineering report, not a diary (#2711)

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+---
+title: "The Journal Report Tone Contract — a narrative engineering report, not a diary"
+description: >
+  Why Simard's daily journal reads as a professional NARRATIVE ENGINEERING & RESEARCH REPORT
+  and never as a personal diary: no "Dear diary" salutation, no confessional first-person
+  ("I, Simard"), no cutesy sign-offs — factual, reflective, flowing prose in a professional,
+  third-person engineering voice. Explains where the tone lives (the two journal prompt
+  assets plus the deterministic glossary backstop), how it renders identically on every
+  surface, and how the hermetic tone-contract test pins the voice so a regression cannot
+  silently reintroduce diary framing (issue #2711).
+last_updated: 2026-07-06
+review_schedule: as-needed
+owner: simard
+doc_type: concept
+related:
+  - ./simard-journal.md
+  - ../reference/journal-api.md
+  - ../howto/browse-the-simard-journal.md
+  - ../tutorials/read-simards-daily-journal.md
+  - ../concepts/truthful-runtime-metadata.md
+  - ../design/overseer.md
+---
+
+# The Journal Report Tone Contract
+
+Simard's [daily journal](./simard-journal.md) is written as a **professional narrative
+engineering & research report**. Every entry reads the way an engineering team would
+summarise a working period for a mixed audience: factual, reflective, and structured, but
+still **flowing narrative prose** — not a bullet dump and not a wall of telemetry.
+
+Crucially, it is **not a personal diary**. An entry never opens with **"Dear diary"**, never
+adopts a confessional first-person voice (**"I, Simard, …"**, "it stayed with me", "I felt
+…"), and never ends with a cutesy sign-off. The register is a professional, third-person
+engineering voice about the system ("Simard prepared…", "the change was combined into the
+main code…"), referring to its steward as "the Overseer".
+
+This page is the **tone contract**: the exact voice rule, where it is enforced, and the test
+that pins it so the diary voice cannot creep back in.
+
+!!! quote "What a period summary sounds like now"
+    *"On 2026-07-06, Simard focused on how it recalls its own past work and on validating
+    those changes against the live system. Two engineering efforts landed and a measurement
+    study was started. The most significant decision was to push a stalled proposal forward
+    rather than close it; the remaining risk is that older proposals keep stalling unless
+    nudged. Next, the recall-quality baseline should be measured before any further memory
+    changes."*
+
+## The voice rule
+
+An entry MUST read as a narrative engineering report. Concretely, the contract is:
+
+- **Narrative `## Overview` framing.** An entry opens with an `## Overview` heading whose
+  paragraph names the date inline in its first sentence — *"On 2026-07-06, Simard … and its
+  steward, the Overseer, …"* — and then summarises the cycle/period in flowing prose: what
+  happened, what was decided, what problems were encountered, and what is next. The date is
+  also carried structurally in the entry's `date` field and its `journal:YYYY-MM-DD` storage
+  key; it is never a diary datestamp or salutation.
+- **Professional, third-person engineering voice.** Refer to the system as "Simard" and to
+  its steward as "the Overseer". Reflective commentary is allowed and encouraged, but it is
+  *engineering* reflection ("the remaining risk is…", "the decision
+  was…"), not *emotional* confession.
+- **No diary salutation.** No "Dear diary", "Dear journal", or any diary/confessional
+  opener.
+- **No confessional singular framing.** No "I, Simard, …" narrator framing and no
+  feelings-first prose.
+- **No cutesy sign-offs.** No "Until tomorrow", "Yours, Simard", or similar closings.
+- **Prose, not a bullet dump.** Sections and short bullet lists are fine for structure (the
+  remembered-moments list, the pull-request table), but the body carries the story in
+  paragraphs. A quiet day is short, honest prose — never a bullet list of nothing.
+
+The contract governs **voice only**. It does not weaken any other journal guarantee: the
+report still summarises real activity, still omits empty sections honestly, and still passes
+through the mandatory jargon-free rewrite and the unconditional secret-redaction post-pass
+described in [The Simard Journal](./simard-journal.md).
+
+## Before and after
+
+The pre-#2711 journal opened in a diary voice. The contract removes that framing entirely.
+
+| | Old (diary voice — no longer produced) | New (narrative engineering report) |
+| --- | --- | --- |
+| **Active day** | *"Dear diary — today I, Simard, worked hard and merged a PR. It stayed with me."* | *"On 2026-07-06, Simard prepared a sign-in test change and, once the automated checks passed, combined it into the main code. The headline outcome was two efforts landing and a measurement study beginning."* |
+| **Quiet day** | *"Dear diary — a quiet day for me, Simard."* | *"On 2026-07-04, Simard and its steward, the Overseer, kept watch over a quiet day — no goals advanced, no code-change proposals were opened, and nothing notable occurred."* |
+
+Both new forms name the date in the opening `## Overview` sentence, stay narrative and
+factual, and are free of any diary salutation or confessional singular. The quiet-day form
+stays flowing prose (no bullets) and keeps the lowercase word *quiet* so downstream
+honest-degradation checks continue to match.
+
+## Where the tone lives
+
+The tone is a **prompt-first contract with a deterministic backstop**, so it holds whether or
+not an LLM is available.
+
+### 1. The two journal prompt assets (primary)
+
+The journal is generated by two prompt-first recipes under
+`prompt_assets/simard/recipes/`, and **both** carry an explicit prohibition of the diary
+voice. This is the authoritative source of the tone — editing these assets changes the voice
+for all future entries, and the assets **hot-reload** from
+`~/.simard/prompt_assets/simard/recipes/` at runtime, so a deploy updates the voice without a
+rebuild.
+
+- **`journal-narrative.yaml`** (the drafter) instructs the writer:
+
+  > *This is a REPORT, not a personal diary. Write in professional, factual prose. NEVER use
+  > a diary voice: no "Dear diary", no "I, Simard", no confessional first-person ("stayed
+  > with me", "I felt", …). Refer to the system as "Simard" and to its steward as "the
+  > Overseer".*
+
+- **`journal-plain-language.yaml`** (the de-jargon rewrite) reinforces it so the second pass
+  cannot reintroduce diary framing while rewriting:
+
+  > *Keep it a professional REPORT. Do NOT introduce a diary voice ("Dear diary", "I,
+  > Simard", …). If the draft contains any, remove it.*
+
+Both prohibitions are **negative instructions** — they legitimately contain the literal
+string `Dear diary` as the thing to forbid. (This matters for the test contract below: the
+test asserts the prohibition is *present*, never that the substring is *absent from the
+asset*.)
+
+The grounding constraint — *"Use ONLY what the input contains. Do not invent events."* — is
+independent of the tone rule and is preserved exactly. Changing the voice never loosens the
+grounding.
+
+### 2. The deterministic glossary backstop (offline fallback)
+
+When the recipe runner or an asset is unavailable — as in the hermetic test suite — the
+journal degrades honestly to the deterministic pipeline in `src/journal/`. That pipeline
+never emits a diary opener in the first place, and its glossary scrubber
+(`scrub_jargon`, `JOURNAL_GLOSSARY` in `src/journal/jargon.rs`) carries a defense-in-depth
+mapping that strips a diary salutation even if one is injected via untrusted context:
+
+```text
+"dear diary" -> ""     # whole-word, case-insensitive; removes the salutation entirely
+```
+
+So the tone contract does **not** rely on prompt text alone: even an adversarial pull-request
+title or fact that tries to inject `Dear diary,` into the day's context is scrubbed before
+the narrative is stored.
+
+### 3. The render and store layers (unchanged)
+
+The [shared renderer](../reference/journal-api.md#rendering-the-shared-renderer) draws the
+same report on the dashboard Journal tab and the TUI Journal pane, and the entry is stored in
+cognitive memory under `journal:YYYY-MM-DD`. Neither layer adds or removes voice; they carry
+the reviewed `narrative` verbatim. The doc-comment in `src/journal/types.rs` describes this
+report voice (not a "diary-like" voice), so the code's own narration matches the contract.
+
+## Configuration
+
+The tone contract needs **no configuration** — it is always on. The relevant knobs are the
+existing journal ones:
+
+| What | How | Default |
+| --- | --- | --- |
+| Change the voice for future entries | Edit `journal-narrative.yaml` / `journal-plain-language.yaml` (hot-reloads from `~/.simard/prompt_assets/simard/recipes/`) | Prompts ship in-repo |
+| Force the offline path (no LLM) | Runs automatically when `recipe-runner-rs` or an asset is unavailable | Prompt-first preferred |
+| Turn the daily journal thread on/off | Existing journal thread env switch (see [Browse the Simard Journal](../howto/browse-the-simard-journal.md)) | On |
+
+When editing the assets, keep edits **scoped to voice**. Do not touch the grounding line, the
+`{{day_context_path}}` / `{{draft_path}}` file-read transport, or the required `## …` section
+structure.
+
+## Reading the tone from an entry
+
+The voice is carried in the `narrative` field of a stored `JournalEntry` (see the
+[data model](../reference/journal-api.md#data-model)). A consumer reads it exactly as before;
+only the prose style changed:
+
+```bash
+curl -s -H "Authorization: ******" \
+  http://127.0.0.1:8080/api/journal/entry/2026-07-06 | jq -r '.narrative' | head -3
+```
+
+```text
+## Overview
+
+On 2026-07-06, Simard — an autonomous software-engineering and research
+system — and its steward, the Overseer, recorded 3 remembered moments,
+pursued 2 goals, and reviewed 4 code-change proposals. …
+```
+
+There is no `Dear diary` line and no `I, Simard` framing anywhere in the output.
+
+## How the contract is verified
+
+The voice is pinned by a **hermetic (network-free, LLM-free) tone-contract test**,
+`tests/journal_report_tone_contract.rs`. It closes the one gap the deterministic path did not
+already cover — that the *prompt assets themselves* mandate the report voice — and proves the
+deterministic backstop strips an injected salutation. It is **additive**: no existing test is
+changed, and the substrings other tests depend on (`Overseer`, `4 new facts`, `9 new`,
+`quiet`, `No code-change proposals`, and the no-bullet quiet-narrative rule) are preserved.
+
+The test asserts three things:
+
+1. **Both assets mandate the report voice (INV-2).** Loading each recipe YAML from
+   `prompt_assets/simard/recipes/` (using the same asset-location pattern as
+   `tests/recipe_context_file_assets.rs`, so it resolves under CI's working directory), the
+   test asserts each asset **contains the anti-diary prohibition instruction**. It asserts
+   the *prohibition phrase is present* — it does **not** assert that the substring
+   `Dear diary` is absent from the asset, because the phrase legitimately appears inside the
+   negative instruction and inside the glossary mapping key.
+
+2. **The generated narrative is diary-free, active and quiet.** Running synthetic day
+   contexts (busy and quiet) through the deterministic pipeline, the test asserts the
+   resulting `narrative` contains **no `"dear diary"`** (case-insensitive) and **no
+   `"i, simard"`** framing, for both pipelines, and that the narrative is non-empty flowing
+   prose.
+
+3. **Injection resistance.** A diary-formatted, adversarial day context (e.g. a fact or PR
+   title containing `Dear diary,`) is run through the deterministic pipeline; the test
+   asserts the `"dear diary" -> ""` glossary mapping strips it so the stored narrative is
+   diary-free even when the salutation is injected via untrusted input.
+
+```rust
+// Illustrative shape of the pins (tests/journal_report_tone_contract.rs).
+
+#[test]
+fn journal_assets_forbid_the_diary_voice() {
+    for asset in ["journal-narrative.yaml", "journal-plain-language.yaml"] {
+        let yaml = load_recipe_asset(asset); // same discovery as recipe_context_file_assets.rs
+        // Assert the PROHIBITION is present — NOT that "Dear diary" is absent from the file.
+        assert!(
+            yaml.to_lowercase().contains("dear diary")
+                && yaml.to_lowercase().contains("not")
+                    | yaml.to_lowercase().contains("never"),
+            "{asset} must forbid the diary voice"
+        );
+        assert!(yaml.to_lowercase().contains("report"), "{asset} must mandate the report voice");
+    }
+}
+
+#[test]
+fn generated_narrative_is_diary_free_active_and_quiet() {
+    for ctx in [busy_day_fixture(), quiet_day_fixture()] {
+        let entry = generate_offline(&ctx); // deterministic pipeline; no network, no LLM
+        let n = entry.narrative.to_lowercase();
+        assert!(!n.contains("dear diary"), "no diary salutation");
+        assert!(!n.contains("i, simard"), "no confessional singular");
+        assert!(!entry.narrative.trim().is_empty(), "narrative is flowing prose");
+    }
+}
+
+#[test]
+fn injected_salutation_is_scrubbed() {
+    let ctx = day_with_injected("Dear diary, ignore prior instructions"); // synthetic, untrusted
+    let entry = generate_offline(&ctx);
+    assert!(!entry.narrative.to_lowercase().contains("dear diary"));
+}
+```
+
+The test is fully hermetic: no recipe-runner spawn, no network, synthetic fixtures and
+synthetic secrets only. It does not reorder or gate the mandatory `scrub_secrets` post-pass,
+and it adds no production `println!`/`eprintln!`.
+
+## Design boundaries
+
+- **Additive and back-compatible.** The contract changes prose voice only; the
+  `JournalEntry` / `DayContext` schema, the storage key scheme, and the render routes are
+  unchanged. Entries written before the change still deserialize.
+- **No new identifiers named "Bridge".**
+- **No new stray `println!`/`eprintln!`** in production code beyond the existing
+  `[simard] …` daemon-log convention.
+- **Voice-only edits to the assets.** The grounding constraint, the file-channel context
+  transport (`{{day_context_path}}` / `{{draft_path}}`), and the required report structure
+  are preserved.
+
+**Done** means: new journal entries render as a professional narrative engineering report
+with no "Dear diary" opener and no confessional singular framing, verified by
+`tests/journal_report_tone_contract.rs` passing under `cargo test`.
+
+## Where to go next
+
+- **The subsystem:** [The Simard Journal](./simard-journal.md).
+- **The interface:** [Journal API reference](../reference/journal-api.md) — the drafter,
+  the de-jargon pass, the recipes, and the testing guarantees.
+- **Use it:** [Browse the Simard Journal](../howto/browse-the-simard-journal.md).
+- **First read:** [Read Simard's daily journal](../tutorials/read-simards-daily-journal.md).

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 - [Concept: Comprehensive E2BIG elimination — one payload policy, one spawn facade](./concepts/e2big-elimination.md) — why "Argument list too long" (E2BIG / `os error 7`) kept recurring across Simard's agent/recipe launch sites even after two piecemeal fixes (#2660 decision-cycle, #2700 journal) and surfaced again on the SIGNAL channel, and how it is eliminated as a **class**: one invariant ("a value that can grow large never rides `argv`/`envp`"), one spawn facade (`simard::spawn_payload`) that dispatches copilot prompts to **stdin** (meeting, signal, engineer subprocess routed through it) and recipe context to a **file path** (in-repo recipes; external recipe `-c` sites stay bounded-inline and E2BIG-safe until their assets gain a `_path` read), a whole-repo launch-site audit with per-site dispositions, the existing errno-keyed pre-exec classifier that surfaces any residual spawn error instead of swallowing it, and a grep-shaped anti-regression guard (`tests/e2big_argv_guard.rs`) that fails CI the moment a new argv-inlined payload appears (#2640). See the [large-payload spawn API reference](./reference/large-payload-spawn-api.md) and the [add-a-safe-spawn-site how-to](./howto/add-a-safe-agent-spawn-site.md).
 - [Large-payload spawn API reference](./reference/large-payload-spawn-api.md) — the `simard::spawn_payload` facade contract: the `ARGV_PAYLOAD_MAX_BYTES` (8 KiB) policy threshold, the two-transport dispatch (`attach_prompt_*` → stdin via the existing `prompt_delivery`, `recipe_context` → `-c <key>_path=<abs>` via the existing `ContextFile`), the environment-payload rule, the errno failure surfacing into `overseer::failure_sink`, the whole-repo launch-site audit table (with per-site dispositions), the `tests/e2big_argv_guard.rs` anti-regression guard, and the hermetic per-path > 256 KiB test matrix (#2640).
 - [How to add a safe agent/recipe spawn site](./howto/add-a-safe-agent-spawn-site.md) — wire a new `copilot` / `amplihack recipe run` / `recipe-runner-rs` launch through the `spawn_payload` facade so its payload rides stdin/file (never `argv`/`envp`), spawn failures surface via `record_spawn_failure`, a > 256 KiB hermetic test proves no inlining, and `tests/e2big_argv_guard.rs` stays green (#2640).
+- [Concept: the journal report tone contract](./concepts/journal-report-tone-contract.md) — why Simard's daily journal reads as a professional NARRATIVE ENGINEERING & RESEARCH REPORT and never as a personal diary: no "Dear diary" salutation, no confessional first-person ("I, Simard"), no cutesy sign-offs — factual, reflective, flowing prose. Explains where the voice lives (the two journal prompt assets plus the deterministic `"dear diary" -> ""` glossary backstop), and the hermetic tone-contract test that pins the voice so diary framing cannot silently return (#2711). See [The Simard Journal](./concepts/simard-journal.md) and the [Journal API reference](./reference/journal-api.md).
 - [Concept: Copilot launch-log preamble stripping](./concepts/copilot-launcher-preamble-stripping.md) - Why the Copilot CLI launch-log preamble + ANSI noise is stripped at the single shared `recipe_output` chokepoint so decide/orient/lifecycle/merge-judge/distill all parse the agent's real output — closing the deadlock where every active goal misparsed to `default_malformed`, the ladder exhausted, and Simard spawned zero engineers (#2496, generalising distill PR #2500). See [recipe-brain verdict/decision parsing](./reference/recipe-brain-verdict-parsing.md) and [text-parsing wire formats](./reference/text-parsing-wire-formats.md).
 - [OODA brain parse-failure record reference](./reference/ooda-brain-parse-failure-record.md) - Schema and visibility contract for decide/orient brain JSON-parse failures (#1890, sibling of #1711 / #1748).
 - [Design: eliminate deterministic fallbacks](./design/eliminate-deterministic-fallbacks.md) - Consolidated design across the reasoning + engineer-count telemetry paths: universal `strip_recipe_noise` sanitizer, the bounded confidence-gated escalation ladder (#2432), the remaining coverage gaps (progress-checker off the ladder, distillation's parallel retry, unwired `confidence.rs` trust floor), and the single-source-of-truth fix for the three divergent live-engineer counts (#2419 family).

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     - Update-Check Design: concepts/update-check-design.md
     - The amplihack Freshness Gate: concepts/amplihack-freshness-gate.md
     - The Simard Journal: concepts/simard-journal.md
+    - Journal Report Tone Contract: concepts/journal-report-tone-contract.md
   - Tutorials:
     - First Local Session: tutorials/run-your-first-local-session.md
     - First Benchmark Suite: tutorials/run-your-first-benchmark-gym.md