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 # Verity
 
-**The open-source, permission-aware shared context plane for enterprise AI agents** — always fresh from systems of record, provably scoped, fast enough for the inner loop.
+**The open-source, permission-aware shared context plane for enterprise AI agents:** always fresh from systems of record, provably scoped, fast enough for the inner loop.
 
-Enterprises run agents across sales, support, marketing, and ops, but each agent is an island: the context they need lives in CRMs, ticketing systems, docs, and wikis. Verity mirrors those systems of record into a bi-temporal memory store via CDC/webhooks, inherits source ACLs into a Zanzibar-style permission graph, compiles caller scope into every retrieval as a mandatory pre-filter, and serves scoped hybrid recall — exposed MCP-first to any agent framework.
+Enterprises run agents across sales, support, marketing, and ops, but each agent is an island: the context they need lives in CRMs, ticketing systems, docs, and wikis. Verity mirrors those systems of record into a bi-temporal memory store via CDC/webhooks, inherits source ACLs into a Zanzibar-style permission graph, compiles caller scope into every retrieval as a mandatory pre-filter, and serves scoped hybrid recall, exposed MCP-first to any agent framework.
 
 **Status: v0.1.** The load-bearing claim is measured: **0 cross-entity leaks across 1,220
 adversarial probes** and **0 stale reads** after CDC supersession (`verity-bench srb`; results
@@ -11,23 +11,23 @@ through SpiceDB, and the ingestion funnel is live (CLI, MCP, minted webhooks, fi
 Debezium CDC, and connectors for Google Drive, Gmail, SharePoint/OneDrive, Slack, Zoom,
 HubSpot, Salesforce, Notion, and Intercom, plus Google Workspace and Microsoft Entra
 directory sync). See [docs/CONNECTORS.md](docs/CONNECTORS.md) for setup per source. Latency is
-honest, not flat — point reads and BM25 stay fast at scale, while dense/hybrid recall rises
+honest, not flat: point reads and BM25 stay fast at scale, while dense/hybrid recall rises
 with corpus size, ACL selectivity, and cache state; the full measured curves with stated
 conditions are in [docs/BENCHMARKS.md](docs/BENCHMARKS.md). What Verity does **not** do yet is
-in [HONESTY.md](HONESTY.md). See [SPEC.md](SPEC.md) — the build contract — and
+in [HONESTY.md](HONESTY.md). See [SPEC.md](SPEC.md), the build contract, and
 [docs/research/](docs/research/) for the research that produced it.
 
 ## The three claims
 
-1. **Provable scoping** — an agent talking to customer A can never surface customer B's pricing. Enforcement is architectural (in-index pre-filters from a ReBAC permission graph, fail-closed), never delegated to the model.
-2. **Live truth** — source change to queryable in seconds. "Opportunity updated" is a deterministic keyed upsert that structurally retires the old value; no LLM in the write path for structured data.
-3. **Inner-loop speed** — point reads (~0.5ms) and BM25 (~23ms p95) stay fast at 1M chunks; dense/hybrid scoped recall is <50ms p95 warm at 100k chunks and rises with ACL selectivity and cache state at 1M (measured 75ms–~1.2s p95). Every number is measured with its conditions stated, never vendor-quoted — see [docs/BENCHMARKS.md](docs/BENCHMARKS.md).
+1. **Provable scoping**, on reads *and* writes. An agent talking to customer A can never surface customer B's pricing, and it can't launder that boundary by writing a summary either: reads are pre-filtered by the caller's compiled scope, and a memory an agent derives from what it recalled carries the *intersection* of those inputs' permissions, not the writing agent's wider scope. Enforcement is architectural (in-index pre-filters from a ReBAC permission graph, fail-closed), never delegated to the model.
+2. **Live truth.** Source change to queryable in seconds. "Opportunity updated" is a deterministic keyed upsert that structurally retires the old value; no LLM in the write path for structured data.
+3. **Inner-loop speed.** Point reads (~0.5ms) and BM25 (~23ms p95) stay fast at 1M chunks; dense/hybrid scoped recall is <50ms p95 warm at 100k chunks and rises with ACL selectivity and cache state at 1M (measured 75ms to ~1.2s p95). Every number is measured with its conditions stated, never vendor-quoted; see [docs/BENCHMARKS.md](docs/BENCHMARKS.md).
 
-## See claim #1 hold — 15 seconds, live
+## See claim #1 hold, 15 seconds, live
 
 ![Two-agent trust demo: alice recalls a group-shared doc via nested-group inheritance; bob stays dark, even under a prompt-injection attempt](demo/two-agent-trust.gif)
 
-`all-staff ⊃ engineering ⊃ alice`; a confidential doc is shared with `all-staff`; **bob is in neither group.** Two agents connect over MCP naming only *who* they are — never a permission token. Alice's recall resolves the nested groups and sees the doc; bob's is dark, and **stays** dark when it tries a prompt-injection to pry it loose. The filter is compiled into the index, so a prompt can't argue past it. Exit code 0 = the boundary held.
+`all-staff ⊃ engineering ⊃ alice`; a confidential doc is shared with `all-staff`; **bob is in neither group.** Two agents connect over MCP naming only *who* they are, never a permission token. Alice's recall resolves the nested groups and sees the doc; bob's is dark, and **stays** dark when it tries a prompt-injection to pry it loose. The filter is compiled into the index, so a prompt can't argue past it. Exit code 0 = the boundary held.
 
 Run it yourself (with `verity-cli dev` up): `python3 demo/two_agent_trust.py`.
 
@@ -45,14 +45,14 @@ deploy/                 # docker-compose for the Postgres profile
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-- **Docker**, running — `verity-cli dev` brings up the dev stack (Postgres/ParadeDB + SpiceDB + MinIO) via `docker compose`. Give Docker ~8 GB RAM.
-- **Rust**, stable — the toolchain is pinned in `rust-toolchain.toml`, so `rustup` selects it automatically.
+- **Docker**, running: `verity-cli dev` brings up the dev stack (Postgres/ParadeDB + SpiceDB + MinIO) via `docker compose`. Give Docker ~8 GB RAM.
+- **Rust**, stable: the toolchain is pinned in `rust-toolchain.toml`, so `rustup` selects it automatically.
 - **A C toolchain + build deps** for native crates (`rustup` does not ship a linker). On Debian/Ubuntu: `sudo apt install build-essential pkg-config libssl-dev cmake`. On macOS: `xcode-select --install`.
 - ~20 GB free disk for container images and the release build.
 
 ## Quickstart (dev)
 
-Run these from the repo checkout. **The first run builds the workspace from source and downloads a small local embedding model — budget ~15 minutes.** Every run after that starts in seconds.
+Run these from the repo checkout. **The first run builds the workspace from source and downloads a small local embedding model, so budget ~15 minutes.** Every run after that starts in seconds.
 
 ```sh
 cargo run --release -p verity-cli -- dev                             # compose up + server + tenant + org-wide scope handle
@@ -61,15 +61,15 @@ cargo run --release -p verity-cli -- query "what do we know about pricing?"   #
 cargo run --release -p verity-cli -- webhook mint my-system --visibility 1    # any system that can POST JSON is now a source
 ```
 
-Prefer `cargo install --path crates/verity-cli` to shorten `add`/`query`/`webhook` to bare `verity-cli ...` (they only talk to the server over HTTP). Note that `verity-cli dev` must still run from the repo checkout — it discovers the compose file and server binary relative to the source tree.
+Prefer `cargo install --path crates/verity-cli` to shorten `add`/`query`/`webhook` to bare `verity-cli ...` (they only talk to the server over HTTP). Note that `verity-cli dev` must still run from the repo checkout, since it discovers the compose file and server binary relative to the source tree.
 
-`verity-cli dev` is the *only* setup step. From there you can drive Verity three ways — the CLI above, the **web console** below, or **MCP** ([the next section](#connect-an-agent-mcp)) — all against the same running server.
+`verity-cli dev` is the *only* setup step. From there you can drive Verity three ways (the CLI above, the **web console** below, or **MCP**, [the next section](#connect-an-agent-mcp)), all against the same running server.
 
 ### …or drive it from the browser (web console)
 
-![Verity console — the built-in denial proof: the same query run through two sessions, one holding the key (3 memories) and one that doesn't (0 memories), ending in "Denied — correctly"](demo/console-denial.gif)
+![Verity console, the built-in denial proof: the same query run through two sessions, one holding the key (3 memories) and one that doesn't (0 memories), ending in "Denied, correctly"](demo/console-denial.gif)
 
-The console has a built-in **denial proof** (above): it runs one query through two sessions — your working handle, and a `proof-blind` session that holds no matching key — side by side. The blind session comes back with **0 memories** and the console says so in plain words: *an empty result is a safety answer, not a bug.* That refusal is the whole pitch, and you can watch it happen.
+The console has a built-in **denial proof** (above): it runs one query through two sessions, your working handle and a `proof-blind` session that holds no matching key, side by side. The blind session comes back with **0 memories** and the console says so in plain words: *an empty result is a safety answer, not a bug.* That refusal is the whole pitch, and you can watch it happen.
 
 `verity-cli dev` prints a console link; open it in a browser (it's the same server, no extra setup):
 
@@ -79,19 +79,19 @@ http://127.0.0.1:7717/ui?tenant=<the tenant-id that dev printed>
 
 A guided setup checklist takes you from zero, and the panels cover the whole loop without the CLI:
 
-- **Playground** — run a scoped recall under a scope handle and see the hits it returns — then narrow the scope and watch what drops, so you can see the fail-closed pre-filter at work.
-- **Memories / Ingest** — add a memory, or drop files, under an explicit visibility.
-- **Sources** — connect a source (Google Drive, Gmail, HubSpot, and more) and back-fill it, so recall inherits that system's ACLs.
-- **Scope** — paste a scope handle to decode it and run reads under it.
-- **People & groups** and **Permission graph** — see who can see what, and *why* (the graph answers "what does X see / who sees Y").
+- **Playground**: run a scoped recall under a scope handle and see the hits it returns, then narrow the scope and watch what drops, so you can see the fail-closed pre-filter at work.
+- **Memories / Ingest**: add a memory, or drop files, under an explicit visibility.
+- **Sources**: connect a source (Google Drive, Gmail, SharePoint, Slack, and more) and back-fill it, so recall inherits that system's ACLs.
+- **Scope**: paste a scope handle to decode it and run reads under it.
+- **People & groups** and **Permission graph**: see who can see what, and *why* (the graph answers "what does X see / who sees Y").
 
 The admin panels (People & groups, Permission graph) need `VERITY_ADMIN_TOKEN` when the server runs gated; a fresh `verity-cli dev` is auth-open, so they just work.
 
 ### …or wire it to an agent (MCP)
 
-See [Connect an agent (MCP)](#connect-an-agent-mcp) below — point Claude Code (or any MCP-capable agent) at the same server and it gets scoped, permission-aware memory tools.
+See [Connect an agent (MCP)](#connect-an-agent-mcp) below: point Claude Code (or any MCP-capable agent) at the same server and it gets scoped, permission-aware memory tools.
 
-Benchmarks (`docs/BENCHMARKS.md` is the honesty log — every number measured, never quoted):
+Benchmarks (`docs/BENCHMARKS.md` is the honesty log, every number measured, never quoted):
 
 ```sh
 cargo run -p verity-bench -- seed --chunks 100000   # synthetic corpus with realistic ACL shape
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ cargo run -p verity-bench -- run                    # p50/p95/p99 per path; load
 ## Connect an agent (MCP)
 
 `verity-mcp` is a stdio MCP server any MCP-capable agent (Claude Code, LangGraph,
-CrewAI, ...) can use. Identity comes from the environment, never from tool arguments:
+CrewAI, and friends) can use. Identity comes from the environment, never from tool arguments:
 
 Use the tenant UUID and principal token that `verity-cli dev` printed (on a fresh `dev` tenant the `user:dev` token is `1`):
 
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ claude mcp add verity \
 Tools: `memory_open_scope` (mint a session scope), `memory_recall` (scoped hybrid
 search), `memory_get` (bi-temporal record read), `memory_remember` (write an
 observation), `memory_record_action` / `memory_activity` (the cross-agent activity
-timeline — check what other agents did before acting), `memory_whoami`.
+timeline; check what other agents did before acting), `memory_whoami`.
 
 ## License